When  I first saw "shitty first drafts" I cracked up laughing because the title to me tells it all. It shows that everyones first draft is the worst in everyway. I know when I draft for the first time I do exactly how she explained it because I would roll my sleeves up and shake my head just to verify that I was ready to create a master piece. Unfortunatly, I was lying to myself because when the paper was done it looked like a child wrote it or that my thoughts should have stayed in my head. In the first draft about the TV, I felt the writer left alot of their opinion in question. they gave enough evidence but not enough character. I just wish they added themselves into the paper more because I easily became bored but thats just my opinion.