My essay

I feel like I am ready because I have been trained on how to organize my paper and with all the other essays we have wrote it will be a piece of cake. I want my audience to see that children around the world are effected by what they see on television. I want the readers to get mad and want to change the problem. Its alot of bad children walking around seeing things on tv that are for adults eyes only and began to grow up to fast just because they think its the right thing to do. Its not and the problem should be stopped before its too late. I plan on reaching the audience emotionally and informatively because what better way to get through to someone than their hearts.